Hello, just to let you know I'm not a professional, just a writer like you
Overall sense
Grammar/spelling
You need to capitalize the beginning of each line and add punctuation marks. This helps to express the feeling of the poem.
Areas of improvement
what it would look like (which sense are you trying to show look or feel, then look at what you wrote following it.
Favorite line
I pondered how crazy that might appear.

Thank you for writing and posting this for me to read, I enjoyed visualizing me doing that. Hope you keep writing. Mystic Angel