Here I am, a NON POET, reading your poems as strictly a reader. I hope you get something out of my review. Please email me and explain anything you think I get wrong. I am trying to learn



Is the poem interesting? Yes, it describes how dreams are exciting
Does the poem sound melodic?Not a rhyming poem, good choice of words, like dizzy display, delight and light
Does the poem say something? Does it have depth?To me, this poem tells of the poets love of dreaming where anything can happen.
Is the poem too abstract? Can you understand the message? No, it is not too abstract. The message is fairly clear, although I don't know if I would use the word insanity, since it almost has a negative connotation, and I think the poet means to talk about the joy of dreaming.
Does the poem contain common clichés? no
Do the words in the poem seemed forced to conform to the form or line syllable count? this is an acrostic poem, and the first words are the most important. These seem natural, and fit the poem's subject.
Is the poem's punctuation used effectively? Yes, although the poet doesn't have to capitalize the first word of every line.
Are there any interesting words in the poem? I like the word escalating. I like the seventh and eighth lines, how they fit together.

I enjoyed reading your poem.
Good luck in the contest!