Overall Impression:I am reviewing this item for the contest I write in December,. . . . This is an interesting style of poetry. Overall it has some great lines in it.

Structure/Form:You adhered to the format and that is done well.

Emotion:There seemed to a couple of emotions. The fist part is a feeling of being rushed and time slipping away. The second part seems more focused on love.

Favorite Line(s):
Time is ticking, slipping away so fast.
The deadline is now approaching,

I like these two lines, because so many can understand this sentiment. Time can seem to fly by.

Suggestions:Any suggestions I make our only suggestions, you may use them or ignore them if you don't agree.

The poem's first half works well. The second half loses some focus. I liked the first part dealing with time it seemed fitting with the hour glass.



I enjoyed reading your poem and thank you for sharing it.




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