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Review of A Life Unknown  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*Reading* Initial hook: very nice flow, I enjoy this Catena Rondo style

*Butterflyb* Atmosphere/Tone/Mood: sad, purposeful

*Suitheart* What I liked: rhyming scheme and acute redundancy

A few parting comments...
when it comes to poems like this I often wonder about the feeling behind it; what prompted this writing?

Hope this helped! Great job on a great piece of readable art!!!

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