Here I am, a NON POET, reading your poems as strictly a reader. I hope you get something out of my review. Please email me and explain anything you think I get wrong. I am trying to learn

I am glad you put how the Diatelle poem should be written. From what I can see, your form is correct, the syllables are correct and the rhyme scheme is also done correctly. I think it is interesting you picked the end of the world. Honestly, I had forgotten all about that prediction. I also like the photo you picked for your poem.

Is the poem interesting? Yes it is. It talks about the common fear of the world ending (yet again)
Does the poem sound melodic? The poem does rhyme
Does the poem say something? Does it have depth? The poem talks about how nothing happened and people wondered why.
Is the poem too abstract? Can you understand the message? Not abstract
Does the poem have power or beauty or both? this one is a simple poem.
Does the poem contain common clichés? Somewhat, but the topic itself is somewhat cliched.
Do the words in the poem seemed forced to conform to the form or line syllable count? no
Is the poem's punctuation used effectively? yes
Are there any interesting words in the poem? ordinary words used well.

Thanks for sharing your poem with us. It is hard to open our hard work to the public! And aren't you glad the Aztecs or Mayans or whoever was wrong!?

Tessa