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This is a WDC Power Reviewers Review!

Please remember that these are just my thoughts, at the end of the day whatever you decide is the right answer!

Initial hook: pretty sonnet reminds me greatly/easily of Shakespeare

What I liked:
"You spit out stinging barbs without a care/the memory of your rage is what I’ll keep."
these are the first lines that give me a glimpse of a conflict

"Your eyes have never looked so cold and bleak/a spark of love and warmth is what I seek."
sounds like the speaker is leaving the cold hearted jerk, good for them! seek warmth else where!