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This is a WDC Power Reviewers Review!

Please remember that these are just my thoughts, at the end of the day whatever you decide is the right answer!

Initial hook: hilarious resolution about the new year made and broken before the new year

Speaker(s)/Flow:flowed really well with the repeating line, the rhymes helped a lot

Atmosphere/Tone/Mood:persistent, hopeful, ...sleepy

What I liked: the whole idea, rhyme scheme,

A few comments/suggestions I had:

(Original quotes will be in black, any changes or suggestions I'll make in blue to make it clear)

washed it down with champagne and some fine beer.
washed it down with champagne and some fine beer.

I hear Dick Clark way off in the distance
is this to establish that the speaker is dreaming or was this New Years last year?



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .