Overall Impression:What a lovely essay. You had some humerous times learning about religion when you were young. You wrote this is in a way that was easy to read and I could see it in my mind. I laughed at your answer about who was the first people were. I aslo enjoyed the part when you described drawing a picture of God in green and how it may have looked.

I enjoyed reading your essay and good luck on the contest.







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