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Given: Jan 17, 2013 at 4:47am
Length: 789 Characters |
781 w/o WritingML
This was a short, but relatively sweet Fibonacci poem. The brief title sets things up, although, to be honest, it kind of made me hope that the poem would be sexier . Anyway, it has the appropriate syllable structure for a Fibonacci poem. I notice that it's a little bit shorter then some other Fibonacci poems, and with a Fibonnacci poem, "a little bit shorter" means a lot less syllables, but it's good for the length. I enjoyed the alliteration in the fifth line and also the alliteration in the sixth line. I admit, I had to look up, "dishabille" in the dictionary, but it's actually a good word for the purpose, because in alliterates well and when you know what it means, it basically sums up what the whole poem is about. This makes it an excellent note to end the poem on.
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