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I use a list of questions for poetry review I learned from Turtle during his poetry course. It helps me focus on the purpose of poetry for my writing and for reviews.

I understand you poem is for a prompt contest. They are strange prompts and odd images! I have to hand it to you for coming up with this poem; I don't think I could have been as creative.


Is the poem interesting? Yes it made me us the internet to look up things I was not familiar with and made me think.
Does the poem sound melodic? not a melodic poem, more an interestingly worded one.
Does the poem say something? Does it have depth? this is what I think of as a literary poem. It states a feeling using references to other artistic works.
Is the poem too abstract? Can you understand the message? To me, this poem was abstract. I do understand the basic feeling behind this poem but it took a bit of imagination on my part. It may be a stretch for some people to understand but it is worth it.
Does the poem contain common clichés? No, absolutely not.
Do the words in the poem seemed forced to conform to the form or line syllable count? You may have been able to write this not in a Haiku form because two of your Haiku almost seem like you were trying to fit the syllable count by using punctuation.
Is the poem's punctuation used effectively? Yes
Are there any interesting words in the poem? Hecka, and that as an end word. I am assuming hecka is slang and so it 'that'. I like it!

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Tessa

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