Oh great, a poem about pizza. What better thing for me to be reviewing right now after I just came from a dinner at one of the few pizza places in Heze, China.

This is a very nice poem. I am not really familiar with the form, but you seem to have followed the required rhythm rather well. Most of the lines capture the spirit of pizza rather well. The only one that I am not completely sure about is the second to last one, "Winner Please?" That struck me as a little bit cryptic. Still it rhymed rather well with that last line which is the perfect ending to a poem about pizza.