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Please remember that these are just my thoughts, at the end of the day whatever you decide is the right answer!

Initial hook: initially seemed a little dull, nothing exciting, but since I know what picture this was prompted by I was able to envision the beautiful night time city scene and it transported me back to times riding in the city, very surreal and relaxing, makes me miss Chicago and Atlanta

Theme: Sunday night driving

Atmosphere/Tone/Mood: relaxed

What I liked:"Never do I lose my way,/no map has my reliance./Let the road decide my fate,beacons providing guidance." Def my fav stanza, especially the last two lines. Perfect way to describe Sunday driving.

A few parting comments...
perhaps consider describing the prompt, at least for your fellow contestants; because I know the pic it gets a 4, w/o it it's a 3.5 for lack of visual affect.....upon reread I see more of the visual but as a stand alone, sans a description of sorts, it'd be better as a longer work



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