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Given: Feb 11, 2013 at 6:04pm
Length: 460 Characters |
460 w/o WritingML
Well written, no mistakes I could find. I am not sure what the contest rules are or what the image was since the link on the "I Write.." contest was to a list of contestants and I couldn't find the rules. I am not sure if this is a continuation of other's stories, or a piece of a story written in a round robin?
Whatever it is, this story seems to be part of a large one and more like a scene. It has good description and the beginnings of the characters.
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