Howdy from up North! I am reviewing your piece as a part of "The Kiwi Review Challenge! - closed" 

You have the voice of a storyteller that transcends the written word. I about died when I read 'A cow of a woman, presumably Nebuchadnezzar’s mother'

You had me from the get-go. This story is amazingly well told, with a distinct style and diction all it's own. I swear, in reading this, that I could hear your characters talk.

I have noted no errors. I have no suggestions. This is EXCELLENT. If I could give you more stars, I would.

Write On!!

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .