Howdy from up North! I am reviewing your piece as a part of "The Kiwi Review Challenge! - closed" 

This is a simple poem, and true to form. Alas, I am not from New Zealand, so I am not even going to guess as to pronunciation in this piece to comment on syllable count *grin*

I appreciate the fact that you made use of color to create visual poetry, and also that you included information on your chosen form in this item.

I think it would be even better if you had the ability to include a picture of your subject. That would really add some shine to this item, and take it to the next level.

Thank you for sharing this small memory. Write On!!

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .