Overall Impression:I am reviewing for I write in 30 day image prompt contest. It has not been closed that long, but I think I know what picture you used. The poem to me, is about a detective lurking in the shadows and waiting for his target. I think he is taking justice in his own hands.

Structure/Form:There is a set structure to the poem. Your rhyming scheme works and a few of the lines repeat. I am curious to know if this is a certain poetic style.

Emotion:Waiting for his target. There is also a sense of accomplishment, even if he finds his deed a little grim.

Favorite Line(s):
His hands clean, the streets bloody,

I like how this demonstrates the duality of his actions. A violent action to close a case.

Suggestions:
None.

I enjoyed reading your poem and thank you for sharing it.



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