Hello Elle

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General Comments and Emotional Impact

The poem is about the keruru a pigeon found in New Zealand. In the poem, you describe seeing and hearing the bird. The imagery is good and the picture given with the poem adds to the visuals of the poem. The scene is well written and collects the features of the bird. You have manged well with the form of the poem.

Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is no rhyming pattern according to the form of the poem which is a septet. The syllable count is perfectly done.

Title and description

The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting and apt.

Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

Overall

A very good poem and I am giving it 4.5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!


~Princess Zelda




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