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Hi Sherri ,

Happy Birthday from WDC

Remember the comments below are just my opinion. I am only one reader out of thousands.
The Heart of the Story/Poem:
Wyatt has escaped the creature from the Bewitching hour for a few years, except this year.

Things That Might Make It Better:
I was hoping he would make it home at least, then get sucked into it.


Things I Like:
I liked the chase, the repetition of the beast calling his name over and over with out saying it was still following him. I had no clue the beast would win in this story, so I was surprised and like surprises in stories! yay!

Hope to read more of your work soon! You write and express yourself very well. Good job!

Grace L
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