Review of showering acts of joy member to member

Why I chose this piece: Birthday

Overall impression of piece I am a bit of a musician so I think of this stuff. I think it might apply to people to. Sometimes we can get kind of jangly in our response to people. We make music, good or bad is our choice.

Grammatical and spelling errors: Seems ok

What I liked? You have described this well. When the orchestra uses one, they make sure that it comes out. Silence can be an appropiate response to many things. We do know that angels have harps. I am not sure how we know that. I thought they played baseball

What I disliked: This is good as far as it goes. I think our world has numerous people who play triangles but no one listens

How the piece made me feel One of the questions to be answered iis why this piece. People respond to that little triangle in different ways. I would guide them more. Happy Birthday

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