Hi Inkwell,

I enjoyed your poem! The rhythm flows well and the fact that the mirror is the narrator is a cool touch, especially since you make it somewhat ambiguous. I especially liked the lines:

The finest crack of silver,
runs down this pane of glass

and

You're evil in the mirror,
with a face that's so like mine.

As for criticism, I'm not sure what you mean by the last line. The rest of the poem is so clear and the images so specific, but this particular thought confused me.

Thanks for sharing this piece! I hope my comments were helpful.

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