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Review of Squirrels and Nuts!.

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General Comments & Overall Impression:

Awesome inane short - I couldn't stop laughing.

First episode did a wonderful job of getting my head spinning while watching squirrels running amok - which often happens to my mind while watching those twitching things. Really enjoyed the take on what they're up to. Not at all what I was expecting.

The second episode was great. You have a great talent for wandering off on relevant tangents. From the Stooges, to overly serious rules of the nuts, to a nut in every garage. Awesome - I'm getting a pretty nutty theme.

Last episode was awesome. I really felt like I was flowing through the Mad Hatter's dreams.

Conclusion:

You've a wonderfully interesting mind. Thanks for - made my day!

I tend to pick at things since those are usually the best reviews I get back. Feel free to email with questions. I'm also always happy to go back and look at any changes you want me too.

WMarsch

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