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Given: Nov 12, 2013 at 8:43pm
Length: 405 Characters |
367 w/o WritingML
The first paragraph hooked me with the wedding vows. This is an exiting story. The the descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The end of the story surprised me.
I like the twist at the end, as well as the picture included in the document. This is a well-planned and written story and I am giving it a 5.0. Write on.
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