A good reading and a good poem...Nicely described. A suggestion to "Source Energy permeates all realms of the infinite", maybe it can be re-phrased as "Source Energy permeates throughout the entire cosmos, beyond the known boundaries of our universe".

The end part, "The Balance, restored" could become "The Balance, The Restored"

Also, maybe capitalizing "eternal awareness" to "Eternal Awareness" would do justice to the entire crafted poem...

These are just my suggestions...