Hey, Fyn .This review is one that 👼intuey bought for you from "Invalid Item"  with the message: Dear Fyn, here are the two reviews still owed, plus four extra, for being late. My sincere apologies. I've been going through a pretty stressful personal health crisis. I hope you enjoy your reviews. God Bless. Tracey'

Please note that this review represents my views as a reader and is not meant to offend in any manner.

Initial Impressions
What an ending!
As I read through the ordeals of this little frog, I was myself wondering what you wrote in the last stanza. What is the point?!

This sweet poem takes us to a captured frog who falls into a pail of milk and is trying to find a way out of the bucket.As usual, the poem is laced with some wonderful images which transport us directly into the frog's place.

Suggestions
The poem is absolutely perfect as it is. I won't change a thing in the poem. It is funny, it's interesting and it tugs the heart just as it is.

Final Thoughts
The message of your description is very well-imbibed in the poem. I had a lot of fun while reading the antics of the frog in the pail of milk. I hope the life turns out in the similar way as well.

Thank you for sharing it.

Keep Writing!