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A pleasant hour Elle *Smile*

A greetings from the "WDC Addicts Anonymous" 

Meet your friend here Joanna pen name: Samberine Everose
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which was listed on the items to review in "The Kiwi Review Challenge! - closed"  hooked me, so i'm here to give you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.

I ‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and discard them, if doesn’t fit to your taste.

*Reading**Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
We don't have winter here in the Philippines, and I don't like cold climate, I'm so weak in cold,
I just do love seeing it,for me its different also from the other season and awesome- looking scattered snow on the ground.
Its good that you experienced winter in New Zealand, you can always see a beauty on it.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
Title - This is the one that captivates me to read it, while searching on the list of items to review.
Just like I've said, I'd like to see the beauty of winter season in New Zealand.
Imagery - I liked how you crafted your words, it really reminds me of a cold rainy evening winter, really how its sad, dull and cold.
Which makes us into despair sometimes, some kind of missing something.
I liked how you delivered your piece in the haiku form, short and speaks a lot, and in depth.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE LINE :
sheets of wind - tossed rain

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any words that can distract the flow.*ThumbsUp*
And no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. Congratulations !!!.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
This is a great piece, you showed it well here the harsh and beauty of a winter.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.
Always, let your pen creatively weep.

Samberine Sig.
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