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 A Great New Product Idea By Mitch Yerzy! Open in new Window. [E]
Joke, Business-Sales-Related
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Mitch, and happy (bleated) 8th ‘birthday’ on here!
This isn’t bad for being such a short piece, and you have a great sense of humor. However, I can’t completely agree with you about telemarketers. Yes, they are ‘unsung’ (as you obviously know why), but I guess somebody has to do it.
Hope you don’t mind, but I did see a couple of niggles:
‘I make my living(,) selling boxes made...’ (don’t need that comma)
‘Therefore, I To celebrate...’ (too many words?)
Otherwise, good job.
Kee ponw ritin gon, Mitch, and may you have many more wonderful ‘birthdays’ on WdC!

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