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Please remember that I'm not a professional writer or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
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*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
I relate this to a memory, a memory inside in our minds that sometimes it haunt us, or sometimes it make us inspired.


*Heart* WHAT I THINK ABOUT THe :

Title - I always check the title of a piece before I read and give a review, the given title hook me, I always intrigue, and fascinated by echo.
Imagery - I liked the words you crafted, it creates an imagery of mystery, where echo are build and created, by using the word past combined with echo, they link, creeping and shadows, hidden and dim.
Rhyme and Rhythm - I liked the free verse you used, I always see free verse which link to an emotional tone in poetry, and it blends.

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn't find any word that can distract the flow.
And no doubt arise.
MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A Great piece.

It's true that an echo is just a reverberation of sound, but in a deeper meaning, there is no echo of a sound when there's is no one produce it. So echo has no original, it will always depend where it came from.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Samberine - The Garden Fairy
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