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I'm your friend here Samberine Everose Author IconMail Icon
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*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
We are all the same, every thing can happen to all of us. Being born here in this world and death in our time. Whether we are good or bad, that is balance. Sometimes, they said in our hands depends our fate, but we can't control natural things and circumstances, maybe that is really our destiny. The more circumstances we had been, a good character was created, or developed, hence, we should always be thankful everything that came to us whether good or bad, the good things make us sweet and the bad things develop our character of endurance.


*Heart* WHAT I THINK ABOUT THe:
Title - The title is the one that hook a reader, if a title is not intriguing, or there's no impact, it can't entice a reader to have a look on it.Your title is simple, but I like how you combine this two words, they are balance.
Imagery - The crafted words too are just simple, a tone of wondering or asking somehow, it just reminds me in a game accepting the possibility of luck.
Form and structure - A short piece, but it tells more, specially on the last two lines.

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn't see words that can distract its flow, it just simple, I'm just craving more on the descriptive words, to make much more creative in the imagery.

 MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A nice piece.
Luck can happen to everyone., whether this is a good luck or a bad luck.

Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 3.5

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.
Samberine - The Garden Fairy
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