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 Paving our new map. Open in new Window. [E]
Love at first sight.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I'm your friend:Samberine Everose Author IconMail Icon
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Please remember that I‘m not a professional or a writing expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works.
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*Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
Sometimes it depends in us, how we hold and nurture to grow the love in a relationship.
But not always, because we can't hold time and its circumstances, the best way is to do always the best we can to our love, without forgetting our selves.


*Heart* WHAT I THINK ABOUT THe

The title- I like the word you used: paving - Hardening..? our new map pertains to the relationship. Good title. We all know that every title is the enticing part of a piece, it allures the reader to read.
Imagery- I liked how you weaved your words, some are description of the one you love,so you let the reader create an image of her, and then the description of the relationship that you've both through and will going through.
Rhyme and Rhythm - A free verse, in narrative , it just blend with the created tone.


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn't find any word that can distract the flow.
And no doubt arise.


MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Although, a piece of every legal paper has always been important to bind the love of every couple, but the most important is the feeling that will always on them, that no one can ever separate them.

Thanks for sharing your piece, its my pleasure to read and give my review.

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.
Until next time.

Samberine Sig.
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