Review number # 3 of week May 1-7,2014

HiSpacecat

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! I have only my humble opinion to offer; please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: The Master It is a perfect title to describe a cat!

First Impression: This could easily be my Quasi, he clearly ruled our house! I laughed when I got to the stanza I purr and nuzzle, have no shame. He had no shame and clearly demonstrated it daily. What about your Venus? Does she?

What I liked: That is was done from the cat's point of view, I thought that gave the poem its true power.

What needs your attention: Nothing, you have done an exceptional job!

Favorite Parts: When the author discloses that it is actually Venus talking. The author summarized a cat's personality vividly throughout the poem. I enjoyed it a lot.

Overall Impression: If you own a cat, each stanza could easily be your own cat talking to you. Excellent! I sense the author is familiar with Elliot's poems about cats by the writing.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .