Review number # 5 of week May 1-7, 2014

Hi

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! I have only my humble opinion to offer; please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Day of Spring. My favorite season so I had to see what you had.

First Impression: I enjoyed the authors interest in the wren. They are very enjoyable to watch and do not frighten that easily.

What I liked: The author assuring the wren that she would be there to watch over her if needed.

What needs your attention: Personally, I think centering it in the middle would make your poem more visually attractive to the reader.

Favorite Parts: The author urging the wren to call out seeking her mate so they could begin building their nest to begin the next stage in their live. In my opinion, there is nothing more delightful than to sit outside and listen to al the birds sing and call to each other. You reminded me of the joy I always feel. I have got to get away from this computer.

Overall Impression: I have no doubt the author is a bird watcher and enjoys spending time with them outside by her tribute to the wren.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .