Review number 7 # of week May 1-7, 2014

Hi

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! I have only my humble opinion to offer; please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: This Is My Home

First Impression: I was surprised to see a poem about submission and just had to read it.

What I liked: I am very familiar with the lifestyle and the commitment it takes to be submissive.. Some personalities cannot live in the manner required to always defer your needs to another.

What needs your attention: Nothing

Favorite Parts: Recognition that both parties grow in this situation, it is a mutual agreement based on trust.

Overall Impression: I think the master should be pleased with this written tribute to him. I did think it could be more in depth but if it satisfies the author and the master so be it.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .