Review number # 9 of week May 1-7. 2014

Hi Dave,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! I have only my humble opinion to offer; please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Together Forever

First Impression: This was so beautiful to read. My immediate reaction was wow!

What I liked: I read it twice and each time it got better to me. I love how beautiful it sounds being read out loud. It is easily could be a song.

What needs your attention: Nothing, Dave. You are an incredible poet.

Favorite Parts: I am particularly found of the second stanza, I know silly a romantic. The author clearly loves someone deeply because this verse speaks knowingly of that wonderful love couples share.

Overall Impression: I loved it. I think the style is exceptionally beautiful Thank you for introducing all the different styles to us. It means a lot to me to see examples so I can learn and links to learn more.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




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