Good evening, Charlie! I'm going to be reviewing Day Angel/Night Mistress for SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP. Please remember that these are only my opinions; please take whichever you find helpful.

First Impressions:
Usually I'm turned off by lack of punctuation in poetry or any form of writing, but the way you write - it works and I really like it! I also like the free verse layout because it works with the message and imagery you're trying to convey. I get a strong sense of imagery and a lot of emotion while reading this.

Overall Thoughts:
Great job writing this, Charlie! You really have a way with words... have you ever thought about writing music? I could definitely see this as a song. I found no mechanical errors, however, it wouldn't hurt to go back to re-read to make sure you're conveying all you want to convey.

Rating:
* * * *

Final Thoughts:
Keep up the great work and write on!

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .