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Hello and good afternoon. My name is Jessica and I'll be reviewing Media Love for SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP. Please remember these are only my opinions; feel free to use whatever opinions are helpful!

First Impressions:
Ah, yes, I remember when I first started writing haiku! I used to write about non-nature things all the time. However, most traditional haiku are about nature. You might want to read up on modern haiku or another form called renga  .

Overall Thoughts:
This is a good start and this is a great introduction to learning about haiku. You follow the form well and capture the essence of the media in such a short amount of space. I thought it worked, however, I feel like it could get even more philosophical. This is where a renga or multiple haiku (modern) might work the best because this could be a whole philosophical debate.

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Final Thoughts:
Again, not a bad start! If you are interested, you can read about the haiku form from the poetry foundation  . Keep experimenting and write on!



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