Some things I Like:

This is such a simple little piece. The sentiment is lovely, the rhymes seems very natural, and it really has a pleasant, uplifting sort of quality to it.

I peeked at this piece because it had no ratings/reviews, and I was surprised that no one had taken the time to do so. It is a sweet little song that seems like it would be fitting and easy to learn for young children or adults.

Observations & Suggestions:

The only thing that I would consider changing is the third line. I think that the "Good morning, Lord!" line would be most effective if used only at the beginning and the end. It would be a very complete pattern then.

Removing this particular line would also give you space to write one more sweet little line in there. Just one more message. Know what I mean?

I don't think that anything really needs to be changed for this piece, but that one line jumped out at me as slightly out of place.

I would love to give you a long, in-depth review for this poem (like I did for the others), but there just isn't much to say for this tiny little song. Regardless, it deserves a rating! I think that it is lovely, and I think that it would go over very well in Sunday School or something similar-- I can hear children singing it each time I read it. Very sweet.



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .