Overall impression: This is a suspense thriller that grabs the reader from start to finish. The descriptive details bring the story to life. This idea is well developed. To me this is a beyond 5 story!

Characterization: A woman not identified reveals the story through her experience. Her character is well defined. A name for her would be good.
The other character is only implied, but it is done well.

Area(s) for improvement: I have some suggestions. notes ▼


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