Overall impression: This a powerful story of the harshness of life for a Polish family. The descriptions of life brings this story a good flavor. The scattered use of Polish words and names adds character to the story. The style is easy to read and it flows well.
Characterization: Bronisława is an interesting character and is well described. Her account is well done and carries the reader into the story from beginning to end. The other characters do not play as big a role but add to the story development.
Area(s) for improvement: I have some suggestions.
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days drudgery she - day's drudgery, she
part, their - part; their
Nobles who - Nobles, who
village had - village, had
shed; built - shed, which was built
corners the - corners, the
box, a - box, it was a
waiving - mispelled - now in the letter you can leave errors as is - as this is how the person wrote - or make corrections
soup stirring - soup, stirring
generation and - generation, and
sleep then - sleep, then
Włodek birth - Włodek's birth
Uriel but - Uriel, but
flood the - flood, the
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