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SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E) A group whose mission is to spread positivity. #1384154 by Simply Positive

Hello Jennifer Jaqua

With its extra long lines, this has the feel of a prose poem. Yet the poem flows smoothly and you do a fantastic job of creating a stream of consciousness. I think many readers who have spent nights awake in restless introspection will really relate to the content of the poem. I for one can really relate.

I think this is a thoughtful, intelligent poem that's flawlessly constructed with no wastage. I have no suggestions for change and no reservations in giving this a full 5 stars.

My favourite part of the poem:
'When I should have called out to Opportunity, I turned and walked toward Shame.'

Really love that.

Keep writing!


Best wishes,
Mark


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