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 |  | Listen To The Rain  [E] Rain teaches me so many things.  |
| (4.5)  SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP LEADER Hello Fi Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  Keep in mind that suggestions made are meant to help, not to criticize your work in any way. ERRORS/SUGGESTIONS: No errors were noticed. I cannot think of anything that would improve the entry other than using capitalization where needed. I think it would make a better presentation if you did so, however, it is only a humble opinion.   WHAT I LIKED: The rhythm is good, and the imagery just as good. I love a good rain, and every sentence written expressed emotion I found terrific.  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" [E]Sherri  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 07/02/2014 @ 11:28pm EDT