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*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Some of the stanzas do not follow the traditional rhyming pattern. For example, none of the first three do, yet the fourth and seventh do. *Pencil*

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*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: Despite some of the stanzas not following a traditional pattern, the poem is still great. It was almost like reading a short story. The imagery used in describing the witch and the man is fabulous. I enjoyed reading the entry, and hope to see more of your work. *Butterflyr*

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