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*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: The rhyming is off in a couple of the stanzas, but other than that there are no suggestions to offer. *Pencil*

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*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm is good overall, and the imagery just as good. You did a marvelous job of expressing why a writer finds it difficult to concentrate on jotting something down. I think we have all felt similarly. Sometimes our Muses stay dormant for a while, but usually return full force. *Butterflyr*

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