Hello Stephanie

Blue eyes seem to impress on you for life. I could understand from the excitement and thrill you expressed through your poem, blue eyes captivated and fascinated you to be sure.

You use this adjectival quite effectively. Without mentioning the name of the owner of the blue eyes, you make the readers guess the identity and personality of this person pretty well.
You substitute the person in your life by mentioning his eyes to make the point that he is your protector and companion for life.
"Your blue eyes leave me feeling secure.
Seeing your soothing, ocean blue eyes leaves me speechless."
Through visual imagery and apt comparisons with the deep blue sea, you created the feeling of being completely immersed in the depths of "blue eyes."

Free verse flows well.
A nice love poem.

Write on!