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| (5.0)  SIMPLY POSITIVE & TRADITIONAL POETRY GROUP LEADER  Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item" Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize. ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No errors were noticed. I cannot think of anything that would improve the entry. It is superb!  CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A  WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhyming form is used perfectly, and the imagery sad, yet also perfect. You did a great job of relaying the abuse the woman suffered and what her peers saw. The poem is terribly heartbreaking, yet well written and the incident relayed with realism I am certain readers will find as good as I did. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" [E] Sherri  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 07/07/2014 @ 5:33pm EDT