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My Lips Turned Blue Open in new Window. [13+]
beaten so badly
by ren (baby no. 2 due in June) Author Icon
Review by jaya Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I think until human beings learn to exterminate this monster called anger, these horrific things continue to happen unabated.
The description the way the child was beaten up perhaps by his own father obsessed and teetering on the brink of madness can move anyone with sensibility.
My first thought is whatever happened to the neighbors. Wasn't it their duty to report abuse to the authorities and stop this inhuman treatment of a child?
The change of positions tells more than what is said. On waking up, his immediate reaction is to beat the child black and blue. Difficult to believe these things taking place in the developed world.
"and then watching from above
as he beat me,
his blue shirt stained red,"

Imagery is overwhelming and deeply saddening.

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