Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

How I found your piece...I am still attempting to review all the participants of The Game of Thrones. Maybe I will finish by fall.

First impressions...at first I was overwhelmed by the length of this piece, I even went further through your portfolio looking for a shorter poem. Boy, am I glad I did not find another. I enjoyed this piece very much.

Was the title interesting...yes, I found it very fitting for the poem.

Was the content rating appropriate...yup, I would think 13+ was rather appropriote.

Did you use a specific form of poetry...I did not recognize a specific form.

Did you follow the form...not applicable

Was there a rhyme scheme- what was it...abab.

Did the rhymes seem forced...none of the rhymes seemed forced. All the lines fit together perfectly

Were words forced to fit syllable count...not that I noticed

Was there rhythm and flow...I loved the flow and rhythm within this poem. The flow was most of the reason why I enjoyed your poem so much. It did not feel as long because it flowed so well.

Any errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation...I noticed no errors in these areas.

Things I would change...I don't believe I would change anything in this poem. It is darn near perfect the way it is.

Favorite parts/lines...These two lines were clearly my favorite in your poem...

My siblings never thought it wrong,
To gobble up the runts.

This poem fit the prompt perfectly and I am thrilled that I found it.

Excellent job!


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