Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

How I found your piece...I am still attempting to review all the participants in the Game of Thrones. Maybe I will finish by the end of summer?

First impressions...This poem was not quite what I was expecting when I read the title and the description yet, I did enjoy your poem.

Was the title interesting...The title was the hook that drew me in.

Was the content rating appropriate...nothing over an "e" in this piece.

Did you use a specific form of poetry...I did not recognize a specific form of poetry. If you did use a specific form please let me know. I am always curious to learn new forms.

Did you follow the form...not applicable

Was there a rhyme scheme- what was it...there was no rhyme scheme withing this piece.

Did the rhymes seem forced...not applicable

Were words forced to fit syllable count...I don't believe you had a specific syllable count withing your lines of the poem.

Was there rhythm and flow...I found this poem to be a bit choppy in rhythm. It was a bit difficult to go from one stanza to another , in my opinion.

Any errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation...I noted no errors in these areas.

Things I would change...I think I would attempt to have a bit more flow in the piece. I enjoyed the premise of the poem, but I think I would have enjoyed it more with a bit more rhythm and flow.

Favorite parts/lines..These favorite lines in the poem...

A diligent canine
Of good breeding,
Needing a fresh start.

What a wonderful image this portrays.
Remember, this review is just my humble opinion. Use what you can and throw away the rest.
Excellent job!
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