Hi there drifter ! "Gasp!" We are here to welcome you to Blog City! Today I am reviewing "Back to the drawing board"  for your blog

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Wondering about my Wanderings  (E) I will share the many thoughts that invade my introspective soul. #1944628 by drifter

General Impressions Thank you for sharing of yourself. Being a male myself, I like to fix things. So the first thing that popped into my head was let your wife read this. But then, since this is more or less a private journal, maybe not a good idea. I found your three years younger than I am. I was born in 1952. So we do have a little in common besides the grammar garden I think I did terrible on it as well lol. But I did enjoy reading your blogs since they deal in personal thoughts, feelings, and emotions it is hard to rate a person anything, but 5 stars. After all, we are Gods children and he didn't create failures only we do that to ourselves.

Favorite Entries My favorite entry is "Back to the drawing board" . The reason I like it is I too get those days you look up into the sky and go why me lord what did I ever do to deserve this? Then that clam gentle answer comes. This life is a test and you are being tested my son. Remember, you signed up for this now get busy and show me your solutions.

Theme or Over all Feeling I feel that this is your personal journal and that this is where you put your thoughts to work on how to resolve life's issues.

Enhancements You use Writing ML to your advantage to emphasize your points and successes. As well as text fonts and bolding.

Activity I notice you really do use your blog. I think that is awesome. Me, I'm a if the moment feels like it kind of blogger I try to do one a week or when the prompts strike my muse then I'll write.

Presentation Presentation has two parts to it. The first part is how well did the author display the text body to the reader? You're using a WDC block format which is correct, but professionals always indent {indent} to save you some problems. I'm not judging just pointing out that's all. The second part is how well does the author display the subject. You do a great job of this. The only thing I found is some miss spelling and some wrong word choices. Hey, we all do this try having a dyslexic keyboard. How i got around this is a free program called Ginger from http://www.ginger.com and another free program Hemingway at http://www.hemingwayapp.com. I cheat why not the goal is write like a professional. They use these tools why can't we?

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation Yes I found a few mistakes. But they didn't distract from what you were saying. Even though I am a Grammar Nazi I still don't worry about it in a blog.

Summery I enjoyed meeting you. I understand you more as a person and see we both share a few things in common. I understand your worries and frustrations. But personally I would hint at a law suit if they dock my wages if they have not properly trained me in the use of their program. That generally tends to stop that nonsense because in the fair wage law they cannot doc you anything unless you physically damage company property. You should read the law, then point this out to them. lol They just might have to rethink their rules a bit. Sorry Mr fix-it in action again. Anyway good luck with your job.

Please remember that you are best judge of what is right for your blog Whatever another person says -- especially me -- whether positive or negative, is just their opinion You are the only one who can decide what is right for your blog.

Thanks for sharing your Blog! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy reading your blogs. Please keep on writing more blog entries just like this one!






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