Hi there, Noyoki ! "Gasp!" We are here to welcome you to Blog City! Today I am reviewing "Invalid Entry"  for your blog

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General Impressions Wow 500 words a day challenge. Even I have a hard time doing that a day. I mostly make up for it by doing 2k or more in one day, but I'm not consistent just only when the mood strikes me. I like how you use the blog prompts to create more to write about and how they help get your word count up. Look at all that practice you get. I see you tell us a lot about yourself in your blogs it is nice to meet you and get to learn more about you.

Favorite Entries My favorite pick is "Invalid Entry" . The reason is I have been there to support my wife with the birth of seven children. I get to see the damage done to my wife's body giving birth. It does make you think of what and why. However, we will never give up our kids. I have 11 total.

Theme or Over all Feeling I feel from the blogs I sampled that you are a complex person very loving and caring. You are learning to improve your writing for several life goals.

Enhancements I noticed you use bold and size a lot for prompts in your blogs. I didn't see much color, but that's cool you do well with what you're doing.

Activity I see your really working hard on your goals of 500 a day. Keep going girl you can do it.

Presentation Presentation has two sections. The first section is how well does the author present the text body? I like the way space your paragraphs since WDC uses block style I don't mark for no indents. The second part of the presentation is how well do you present your subject with your choice of words. You do this very well, I enjoy your style and the way you dig in and answer the prompts you get fairly serious. Me I always look for the twist and humor, I can put into it.

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation
I pried and tried.
I looked far and wide.
Alas, no bad grammar,
Could this Grammar Nazi find! (Please excuse my poor attempt at humor, but it is true!)

Summery I enjoyed my visit to your blog I hope to see more of you around WDC. I had a cat that looks just like the black cat in your port. When he hides ​his face you though you were looking ​at a pure black cat. What a character that cat was.

Please remember that you are the best judge of what is right for your blog Whatever another person says -- especially me -- whether positive or negative, is just their opinion You are the only one who can decide what is right for your blog.

Thanks for sharing your Blog! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy reading your blogs. Please keep on writing more blog entries just like this one!






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