Hi amy-Finally writing a novel. . It's 💙 Carly - aka Joan Watson doing a raid of your portfolio. I saw some very interesting pieces that I would love to come back and peruse, but since I am getting a late start on this I decided to go with your poetry piece, "Invalid Item" .

I am thinking this was written for one of the prompts last month for either Blog City or the 30 Day Blogging Challenge. I love how you handled the poem - integrating all the letters of the alphabet (as asked by the prompt) and you turned it into something that truly shows the reader who you are.

You used enjambment to create a flow of ideas and let the sentence carry on into the next line, making the flow rather seemly.

It is really well done. I wish I had been so creative with the prompt.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .